H is for Horror (How to Create)
This post is not about how to write a
horror story, but how to add horror to any story. Horror is an element that can
be utilized by every writer, just like romance, action, mystery, and suspense.
Here are 10 tips on how to create horror:
1.
Bring
your nightmares to life on the page.
If it scares you
awake with a pounding heart, and makes you not want to close your eyes again,
then it’ll scare others from wanting to even turn off their lights to sleep.
2.
Get
into people’s heads by using fears and phobias.
This is a sure way to
scare anyone. Some of the most common fears are:
Arachnophobia (fear of
spiders)
Ophidiophobia (fear of snakes)
Achluophobia (fear of the dark)
Coulrophobia (fear of clowns)
Dentophobia (fear of dentists)
Nemophobia (fear
of blood)
Nosocomephobia (fear of hospitals)
Torture your
characters with these fears and your readers will cringe beneath their
blankets.
3.
Pick
an eerie setting.
Or several eerie
settings as your story moves forth and changes, such as a haunted house, a
cemetery cloaked in fog, a dark alley or a cob-webbed basement.
Have you ever been
somewhere that gave you the chills? Write about it!
4.
Write
in a dark, foreboding tone.
If you were sitting
at campfire or in a dark room telling a scary story, how would you manipulate
your voice to heighten the fear? What words would you use to bring an extra
dash of horror? Write exactly like that in your story.
5.
Write
vivid descriptions.
The more vivid you
are, the easier it will be to scare your readers and make the hairs on their arm
stand on end. Use all five scenes: sight, taste, smell, touch and sound. If
your MC sees ghosts, let him/her also smell rotting flesh, feel invisible hands,
hear breathing, and even taste dirt or formaldehyde on their tongue.
6.
Use
the sixth sense.
Share your
character’s sixth sense. Does he/she have a feeling something is going to
happen? Does he/she think someone is following them, lurking in the shadows?
Let your readers know all of this to build tension.
7.
Share
your MC’s thoughts.
If your readers know
what your MC is thinking and feeling, you have more opportunities to scare
them, so share his/her thoughts and pain whenever possible, especially when you
need to build suspense.
8.
Surprise
your readers.
When your characters
are at ease, so are your readers, and that is the perfect time to spring
something unexpected on all of them. Let something sneak out from under the bed
and grab your MC’s ankle, or whisper something in his/her ear.
9.
Get
inspired by horror tales.
10.
Watch
scary movies and read horror stories.
Study how other
authors create horror and what frightens you while you’re watching a scary
movie. Then use those techniques.
QUESTIONS: What’s your favorite horror
movie and/or book? Have you written a horror story?
SHARE: Your tips for creating horror.
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I used to love to read horror and watch scary movies. That ended when I had children and had to be the brave one. I'm sure I couldn't write it but your tips sound right on. Let's not even think about spiders.
ReplyDeleteI could never write a full-out horror story, but I do include elements of horror every now and then in my stories. :) I figured at least one person would mention they don't like spiders. :P
DeleteNice! I would add, stretch the tension. That moment when they can hear something scraping through the blackened hallway toward them, make it last as long as possible, allowing the characters to marinade in their own fears which may be worse than the reality.
ReplyDeleteNice addition, Crystal! Tension is a great tool for horror.
DeleteI particularly enjoy reading about the "silence" - maybe a clock ticking, pulse thumping (while awaiting), a drop of sweat hitting the floor. Even though it wasn't a horror movie, I loved Hitchcock's "Vertigo" and how Jimmy Stewart was terrified.
DeleteOh, the silence a writer can create for a scene is always really good. Thank you for mentioning that, Mike! :)
DeleteGreat post Chrys! Reading when the characters are going through these emotion if done properly- is spine chilling!
ReplyDeleteThank you! It sure is. :)
DeleteGreat reminder you have here to add this element into any story, no matter the genre. It's "spice" to be sprinkled for an unexpected punch.
ReplyDelete*wanders off to create some creepy fog and sighs in the dark*
It is spice! That's a great way to put it, River! ;)
DeleteI've not yet attempted horror, so your list is educational for me. While I love stories of witches, am a closet lover of Supernatural and other assorted spooky tales, I don't go in for the really dark stuff with excess blood and guts (coward). But I have recently written a story that dabbles in witchcraft, but it's a funny story. No one turns into a toad.
ReplyDeleteI've only written a light horror flash fiction story, but other than that I haven't attempted a full-on horror story. I love witchcraft books, and I bet your story is great, even if no one is turned into a toad. ;)
DeleteHorror is difficult to write well and obviously even harder to film well. John Carpenter's The Thing is one of my favorite.
ReplyDeleteNow I'm off to create a story about clown snakes who spit blood and invade a hospital...
Horror is very difficult to write, which is why I'd never be able to write like Stephen King. haha
DeleteThat would be an epic story, Alex! ;)
Horror is hard to write comedy, but I think those will help add a bit of tension to any story!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you think so, Sonia! :)
DeleteChrys, I am very passionate about the horror genre but the terror it causes within as I am writing it leads me to only add in elements of horror, dwelling instead more in the land of the supernatural. I am a big fan of Anne Rice, Dean Koontz, Stephen King and lately I have been loving Edgar Allan Poe's work. Joyce Carol Oates gets into some very spine-chilling territory at times as well.
ReplyDeleteI also lean more toward the supernatural. It's lighter, but also far more interesting to me. My supernatural-thriller series is where I've used these tips to add splashes of horror.
DeleteYou give good advice to aspiring writers. They must love getting tips from your blog. I am not a writer but I surely admire those of you who are.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog today. It is very nice to meet you.
Thank you, Grammy! That means a lot to me. Of course, I'll be stopping by again today. :)
DeleteSome good tips indeed, getting into people heads can be the best part. It is hard to write though
ReplyDeleteGetting into people's heads is a lot of fun, indeed. ;) But yes, you're right, it is hard to write.
DeleteI've not attempted to write horror--yet.
ReplyDeleteRay Bradbury wrote a few scary stories that had me turn on all the lights at night.
I've only done light horror. I'm not sure I'd be able to do the kind of work that Stephen King does. I'll leave the real horror to him. ;)
DeleteHorror is what I write…I started out with psychological suspense but it kept getting darker.
ReplyDeleteFavorite scary movie: The Sixth Sense, because it was brilliant. Also liked that I cared about the characters. The first time I saw the big reveal, I was devastated. Never saw it coming.
Favorite scary book: Bag of Bones by Stephen King, along with about 20 others of his. :)
Psychological suspense can get pretty dark. The darker the better. ;)
DeleteThe Sixth Sense was pretty darn brilliant. And Stephen King is . . . well, the King! haha
I haven't written horror but will try a mystery one day. Horror films used to scare the daylights out of me but my sisters and I couldn't help watching on ~ The Evil Dead, Prom Night (or Prom Queen ~ Carrie, I think), Freddy Kreuger films etc.
ReplyDeleteI know Ray Bradbury's Something Wicked This Way Comes scared-thrilled me. I was so in awe of his imagination.
I'm going to have to red that book! ;) Thank you for stopping by Claudine!
DeleteI've written horror short stories, but not sure I could do longer than that. Having to live and breathe something scary for months doesn't sound too fun, haha.
ReplyDeleteI've only written light horror short stories. I don't think I'll be able to do anything longer or scarier.
DeleteMy favourite horror story is The Woman In Black, by Susan Hill - chilling in all its forms. And yes, I've written several short horror stories and am currently serialising a ghost story on my blog for the A to Z. It's not a genre I'm that familiar with, I always swayed more towards paranormal than horror, but I enjoyed writing my ghost story, The Burning Web :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tips - I'm especially with you on that last watching and reading horror stories - I love a good scare :)
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I've been intrigued by The Woman in Black, but I just haven't picked it up yet. Maybe this year, in October, I'll check it out at the library and give myself a good scare. ;) I've written a short story as well but it's not scary at all. haha
DeleteYou're welcome, Sophie! Thank you for commenting! :)
Hmm, favourite horror, that's hard, I love so many. For scares I think it has to be Juon - The Gruge, original Japanese version. My husband and I sat curled up on the sofa watching that scared out of our wits :). I love to write horror (short stories only so far) and your point about thinking about what scares you is such a good one. That's what I try to do when I want to freak people out.
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Oh yes, the original Grunge is very scary. The Japanese sure know horror!
DeleteIf you write what'll scare you, there's no doubt that you'll scare others. ;)
The only time I've tried writing horror was for an assignment - we had to write something in traditional ghost story style. It was a lot of fun - I'll definitely be trying it again with your tips, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThat's awesome! I hope my tips help you, Laura. :0
DeleteHorror is the one area where I've always had trouble. I'm definitely going to save this and try out these tips. Thanks!
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Great! I hope my tips help you to tackle this element. :)
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