When you end Chapter Two, DON’T STOP! Look at your detailed plan (if you have one), determine where you are, what needs to happen next, and keep writing! Chapter Three is waiting to be written.
Here are six writing tips to remember
while you are writing:
1. Always listen to your gut, even if it means you
have to do more work, because in the end it will be worth it. I recently
learned this lesson while editing my first book. I kept feeling as though
something was missing, that I needed more substance in-between the parts of my
book that were thrilling. I ended up going back over the entire manuscript to
add in filling material to help the flow. This took weeks, but I am happy
with the end result.
2. Use dialogue tags (he said, she said). Beginning
writers forget to do this, which causes the reader to become confused, but you
don't need one on every line, especially if two people are talking back and forth. Being more descriptive in your writing
can eliminate the need for a dialogue tag. And, please, don’t
limit yourself to “said” all of the time. I believe using another
form can heighten the impact of the dialogue. Again, you can do the same
with physical cues and details without the need of a dialogue tag, but you
still have to make it clear who is speaking before, or immediately after, one
of your characters has a dialogue.
Try using these alternatives:
*Cried
*Demanded
*Pleaded
*Sighed
*Inquired
*Wondered
*Gasped
*Screamed
*Whispered
*Mocked
3. Avoid passive voice as much as possible. Examples of
passive voice: had been delayed, will be held. Passive voice also occurs when
past tense verbs (tangled, beaten, diagnosed, etc.) follow "were",
"was", and "is". This is a common mistake that many writers
do, but once you learn how to rearrange the sentence to change it from passive
voice to active voice, it becomes easier to fix and avoid.
4. Read books in different genres than what you write in. For
example, to learn how to write suspense (even if it is just for one chapter)
read a thriller to understand the style. Also, study books by popular authors
to see why readers enjoy them.
5. Carry a pen and notebook everywhere you go, even to bed in
case you get an idea while trying to fall asleep, because even though you say
you'll remember in the morning, you won’t.
6. Write every day, even if it's just a sentence. Some days
you may struggle to write a single good sentence, while other days you may
produce pages and pages of genius. The point is, if you make an effort to write
every day, your writing will improve and it'll become easier to write daily.
If you follow these six simple steps, you will be that much
closer to THE END!
QUESTION: Do you know a good writing
tip? Feel free to share it so we can all try it!
Chrys, I had no idea passive voice was a bad thing. Thanks for saving my manuscript!
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